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Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 4:59 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Tags : None Hey peeps! Okay, basically this is my own original TV show called Reddick. It's going to feature Witches, Demons, Mythological Monsters (literal myths) and other stuff like Vampires, Werewolves, Zombies, Shape-shifters etc. I promise it's not as corny as it sounds!!!. The main character is called Alex; she's a Witican. A Witican is like a slayer of Witches. So she's the good guy. Alex has similar powers to Witches. She can cast spells, make potions (there isn't much of that) and I added powers of combat to both Witches and Witicans to add to the tension and also to make it more interesting. Witches are evil, as you may have guessed already. Just to tell you a few things before you read, you'll need to know this. Witican- Slayer of Witches. Witches- The bad guys. They have no ability to love and they have a lack of conscience. The Coven- The thirteen oldest and most powerful Witches of all time. Unlike other normal Witches, they are immortal. But they must take a certain potion to become immortal, which is very hard to make, but all of the Coven have done it. They are trapped beneath ground by very powerful magic. The Wicca- Is a large, world-wide group of Witches who are loyal to the Coven. They long to see them freed. They attempt to free the Coven and would do anything for the Coven. Rouge Witches- Are free spirits. They work for themselves. There are some good Witches. They just became Witches but were never evil. All for unique reasons. =D Darla- She's a member of the Coven. She was cursed with a conscience and the ability to love. She has cut off contact with all of the Coven. She fights for the greater good. The Coven really want her dead. Right, I think that's mainly what you need to know. Oh yes, just one more thing. You know the way Vampires MUST feed of blood? Yeah, well Witches MUST feed off fear. They need it to survive. Well I think that's everything. Hope you enjoy this! Thanks for reading! =D (that is if you still intend to. =P =D Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick. Last Edited By: Anarchy Angel 12/14/09 9:51 AM. Edited 1 time.
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Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:00 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Teaser: EXT. OUTDOORS. NIGHT. The camera leads us down a dirty, rocky path and all we hear is the sound of running footsteps. This stops when we arrive at a hole in the ground. After a moment the camera moves on down the hole and we are in a cave. CUT TO… INT. CAVE. The scene opens on a fire crackling fiercely. As we watch it changes colour. We hear someone from off-screen speaking in a strange language, presumably Latin. This continues for a moment. The camera pans out slowly; we are in a cave underground. We see a group of cloaked people gathered around the fire. Two similarly cloaked people hold a tightly bound girl up. A close up on her face reveals that she is terrified. The two holding her up step forward, dragging the reluctant girl between them. This obviously seems to be some kind of ritual and we seem to be nearing it's climax. As they approach the fire, it seems to grow, to burn more fiercely. There seems to be no hope for the girl. A light breeze blows, playing around the edges of the cloaks. This seems to have put out the fire easily. Everyone whips around . We don't see the source of the disturbance, but it seems to agitate the figures, as they pull out knives that seem to be made of bone and rush off-screen. We hear the sound of a fight ensuing. An inhuman scream is heard. We assume someone has been hurt or killed, but the only thing we see is the girl's horrified face. CUT TO… EXT. A COLD NIGHT ALONGSIDE A VOLCANO. The camera focuses on a volcano with a grey mist surrounding it; it's the middle of the night. It stays still for a moment before the camera rotates slowly to our right-hand side. We look at the town that is being overlooked by the volcano. After a few moments the camera rotates to the left-hand side and stays still again. The camera begins to shake a little, in unison with the volcano. Then, suddenly lava begins spurting violently out from the top. This goes on for a while. The lava slowly begins to decrease in it's volume and soon later it stops. The volcano lies still again. CUT TO... INT. BACK IN THE UNDERGROUND CAVE The embers of the fire quench and the cave is empty. The camera focuses on the remains of the fire. After a few moments a hand appears from off-screen and picks up a few ashes. Then we see the ashes being dropped sporadically back into the remains of the fire. The camera slowly zooms out and we see a cloaked figure like before. At a walking pace the camera zooms back in and all we see is their smile. "Perfect," the voice whispers before walking out of the cave. CUT TO… INT. ALEX'S BEDROOM. The scene opens on an alarm clock which reads 06.59. After a few seconds the time changes to 07.00. The sound of the alarm ringing fills the room. After a few moments the camera pans out and we see a female lying in bed. She's got long, brown hair which covers her face so we cannot see any facial features. After a minute or so she puts out her hand and hit's the snooze button on the alarm clock and turns over to sleep again. Then there is a knock on her door and it opens. A red-headed woman walks in and sits on the edge of Alex's bed. ANGELA: Alex, honey. Time to wake up. Alex moans in the bed and turns to face her mother. She sits up and wipes the hair from her face. ALEX: (Tiresomely) Can't I just go to school tomorrow. I'm so tired. ANGELA: No c'mon, you'll feel better when you get up. ALEX: Alright, I'll be down in a few minutes. ANGELA: Good girl, I'll get started on breakfast. Angela gets up off the bed and slowly walks out, gently closing the door behind her. Alex sits up, revealing her bare legs from semi down her thigh, down. We see that there are lots of cuts and grazes. Alex opens out her hand and an orange mist leaves them, hitting her legs. When the mist disappears her legs are clean, not a cut to be seen. She grabs a pair of nearby jeans that were lying on the floor and slides them on, standing up as she does so. She turns her back to the camera and takes off her pink, pyjamas top, revealing her bare back. She grabs a cream-coloured t-shirt and puts that on, then grabbing a green jacket and putting that on over it. She picks up a pair of black converse and puts those on. She then walks over and opens her curtains, then continues on to the mirror. She picks up her hairbrush and brushes her hair whilst looking in the mirror. Then she walks out of her room, meanwhile hitting her shoes with another orange mist which ties her shoelaces. CUT TO… INT. KITCHEN. We first see Alex's Mom standing beside the cooker, holding a frying pan in her right hand and a fork in her left hand. When Alex walks in Angela turns and smiles. ANGELA: Almost done. You look great, told you you'd feel better. Alex smiles a little as she walks over to the table and sits down. She looks up at the TV which shows Tom chasing Jerry through the house until Tom runs into the wall and gets his head stuck in the mouse hole. Jerry laughs and waves as Tom glares in at him, struggling to free himself. Alex smirks slightly as she picks up the remote. ALEX: Mind if I change the channel? ANGELA: Sure, go ahead. Alex flicks through a few channels before stopping on a news programme. ANGELA: What happened there? ALEX: Sssh. Alex turns up the volume of the TV as the camera zooms into it. We see a volcano shooting out some ash and we see lava covering up what looks like to have been a town. There's a newsman speaking from a helicopter. NEWS REPORTER: We're sorry to interrupt your programme but we must bring you this important news bulletin. The Asama Volcano in Japan suddenly erupted at local time 03.19 last night. The reasons for the eruption are unknown and it was completely unexpected. We brought in volcanist David Hughes for an interview. DAVID: This eruption has completely shocked the world and us Volcanists. We examined the volcano only two weeks ago and saw no possible evidence or reasons for it to erupt. We're still looking into it. This is the most violent recorded eruption in the last eighty years. NEWS REPORTER: It is estimated that one thousand, six hundred and fifty eight people were killed in this eruption. There are no known casualties thus far. We'll update you with more information as soon as it comes our way. Good morning people. The news theme song plays and then goes back to the violent army programme that must've been on before it. Alex switches off the TV. ANGELA: Terrible isn't it? Angela sits down at the table with a plate of rashers, sausages and some toast for Alex. She then pours her a glass of orange juice. ALEX: (Pensively) Yeah. Terrible. ANGELA: You okay? ALEX: Yeah, thanks. Just uh…tired. ANGELA: No surprise there. Poor thing. I promise you can relax later. I'll get in a DVD. Sound okay? ALEX: Yeah sure, I'd like that. Alex smiles as she eats up her breakfast. As soon as she's done she takes the dishes to the dishwasher and loads them in. ALEX: Well, I'm off to school now. I'll see you later. Bye Mom. ANGELA: Bye Alex. CUT TO… INT. HALL. As Alex walks out through the hall she picks up her school bag and casually walks out the front door. END OF TEASER OPENING CREDITS: INTO OBLIVION (RENUNION) BY FUNERAL FOR A FRIEND. Starring: Michelle Trachtenberg as Alex Briana Evigan as Hayley Melissa George as Darla Elisha Cuthbert as Tina T.R. Knight as Mike Chris Lowell as Dougie Guest Starring: Kate Walsh as Angela Rachelle Lefever as Callie Karl Urban as Principal Woods Michael McIntyre as Mr. Sampson William Gregory Lee as Librarian ACT I: CUT TO… EXT. OUT IN THE STREET OF COSTA DE LAS ROCAS. MORNING. The piano intro plays as Alex walks from the front door onto the sidewalk. We are young, we run green, we keep our teeth nice and clean , See our friends, see the sights, feel alright, We wake up, we go out, smoke a fag, put it out. As Alex walks along she looks around at teenagers messing around, chasing each other, walking to school together, some smoking, others fixing their makeup. Are we like you? I can't be sure, Of the scene, as she turns, We are strange in our worlds. Alex looks at these people, maybe looking envious, also looking on like they are crazy. She looks behind her at some groups who are acting crazy. But we are young, we get by, can't go mad, ain't got time, Sleep around, if we like but we're alright. Got some cash, bought some wheels, took it out, 'cross the fields, Lost control, hit a wall, but we're alright. The camera focus on some students/adults that are running frantically, as if they are rushing. Then we see a hot guy pull up beside three girls who are walking on the sidewalk and it looks as if they are flirting with each other. Then when he drives off we see that there is a big dent on the back left corner. The girls frown and it looks as if they are bitching about it. Alex smirks and shakes her head. Are we like you? I can't be sure, Or the scene, as she turns, We are strange in our worlds. The camera shows a group of skater guys skating together and it looks as if they think they're cool. A few guys and girls point at them, laughing. But we are young, we run green, keep our teeth nice and clean, See our friends, see the sights, it's alright. We see a group of friends messing around, one with a camcorder. Are we like you, I can't be sure? Of the scene, as she turns, We are strange in our world. Alex begins to look around. She wears a confused expression on her face. She takes out a map of town and looks at it, we can guess she is lost. The camera circles around her quickly and numerous times. But we are young, we run green, keep our teeth nice and clean, See our friends, see the sights, it's alright. The camera shows us a girl walking. The girl looks up and the camera shows that she can see Alex looking completely lost. She runs up to Alex just as the song ends. HAYLEY: Excuse me, are you lost or something? ALEX: Yes actually, I'm looking for Costas De Las Rocas High. HAYLEY: (Smiles Brightly) I'm going there myself! You can come along! I'm Hayley by the way. And I'm not a crazy murderer about to lead you to your death or anything. Okay, I'm rambling, sorry. ALEX: (Smirks) Thanks, that would be great. I'm Alex by the way. HAYLEY: (Smiles) So we better get moving. I have to meet Doug before class starts. Alex and Hayley begin to walk. ALEX: Okay. So, speaking of murders and stuff, are there many around here? HAYLEY: Huh? I try not to listen to that stuff. Just makes me sad. ALEX: Right. Sorry. So uh…tell me about Rocas… HAYLEY: Well, everybody our age… What age are you? ALEX: Turned seventeen last November. HAYLEY: Cool, same here. Except July. Anyway, people our age always hang out at the beach. ALEX: Awesome! I love the beach. I didn't live near one in New York. HAYLEY: Swimming there would be kinda cold anyway. And isn't the water like polluted? ALEX: Sucks there. Really didn't like it. And there were these troublemakers in my town, at least there are no gangs like that here. HAYLEY: …let's talk about something else! So do you like it here so far? ALEX: Yeah, it seems great. I love the sunshine! HAYLEY: Yeah, that is a very good thing about living here. Here's the school. Can you find your own way to the office? ALEX: Yeah, I should be able to find it okay. HAYLEY: I would stay with you, but I have to talk project work with my friend Doug, and he gets really paranoid that someone will steal our ideas. ALEX: Sure. Thanks for the help. Really appreciate it. HAYLEY: Sure. Hayley smiles as she walks away. CUT TO… INT. SCHOOL HALL. Alex is walking through one of the many school halls. She looks at each door, hoping that one of them will be the office. Though all she can see is classrooms. She bumps into many people as she walks along. Many people stare at her which makes her feel a little self-conscious. After a moment she walks up to a friendly-looking guy. ALEX: Hi there, my name's Alex. I'm new here. I was just wondering could you tell me where I could find the office. MIKE: Sure thing, I'm Mike by the way and welcome to Rocas. You just walk down the hall, turn left there and go up a few steps and it's the second door on the right. ALEX: (Smiles) Thanks a lot. MIKE: Sure, need me to take you there? ALEX: I should be okay, thanks. MIKE: You're welcome. If you need any more help then you just let me know. ALEX: Thanks, bye. Alex smiles as she walks down the hall and goes to where Mike said. When she comes to the office door and knocks on it gently. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Come in. Alex gently opens the door and walks in. ALEX: Hello sir, I'm the new girl. Alex Reddick. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Ah Alex, it's good to see you. Please sit down. Alex smiles as she sits down. Principal Woods roots through the drawers at his desk and pulls out a small file. He opens it up and begins reading it. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Right. Alex Reddick. Previously from New York. Straight A student. Suspended once for skipping school. He smiles a little as he looks up at Alex. PRINCIPAL WOODS: (Cont'd) Unusual for a student with your credentials. I hope I won't be seeing anything like that here. ALEX: No, of course not. Some stuff just came up that was…unavoidable. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Right, well just to tell you. We're a very strict and proud school here. We don't take any nonsense from any student. So we expect you to work to the best of your ability and make good attendance. Other than that we've no other major rules. We're very fair but we don't take rubbish. Understand? ALEX: Yes sir. PRINCIPAL WOODS: If you have any questions or need help with anything don't hesitate to come see me. ALEX: Thank you sir. PRINCIPAL WOODS If you just fill out these forms and hand them into the librarian while getting your books you'll be sorted. ALEX: Thanks sir. Alex smiles warmly as she gets up and takes the forms from Principal Woods. She smiles again as she turns to walk out. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Oh and Alex. Alex turns to face him. PRINCIPAL WOODS: Welcome to Costa De La Rocas High. ALEX: Thank you sir. Alex smiles again as she turns and walks out. CUT TO… INT. SCHOOL HALL. Alex walks back into the hall where she met Mike and stands in the middle and looks around again. ALEX: Library, library. Where are you? Alex continues walking as she pulls out a school map from her school bag. She runs into a blonde girl who appears to be rushing. When they collide the books and papers that the girl was carrying all fall to the ground. A couple of guys in the background laugh. ALEX: I'm so sorry! TINA: You should be you- The girl stops speaking the moment she turns and faces Alex. Her facial expression turns from angered to one of shock. She glares at Alex for a moment. She doesn't speak, she just bends down and picks up her stuff, Alex helps. When they both get up Alex hands the girl back her stuff who doesn't say another word. The girl storms off without saying a thing. Alex turns around quickly and looks at the girl. The camera goes into Alex's POV and we see an extremely dim white/golden glow around her, so dim it's almost non-existent. ALEX: (To self) Weird. HAYLEY: What just happened there!? Hayley jogged over to Alex and smiled as they spoke. ALEX: I bumped into her and knocked her stuff. HAYLEY: I thought she'd kill you! ALEX: Why? HAYLEY: She's very temperamental. ALEX: Who is she? HAYLEY: Tina Mason, she's a senior too. After a few moments of silence the bell rang, signalling the start of class. ALEX: Darn it, I didn't get time to get my books. HAYLEY: That's alright, get them at lunchtime. C'mon you can look in with me. ALEX: Cool, thanks. Alex and Hayley walk along to class. CUT TO… INT. CLASSROOM. Alex and Hayley are sitting down at a table near the back. They are talking to a guy who sits at the table just in front of them. DOUGIE: Who's this chick friend of yours Hayley? C'mon, spill! HAYLEY: Alex, this is Dougie, that friend I was telling you about. Doug, this is Alex. ALEX: Hey there. DOUGIE: Hi. A person called Dougie's name so he turned around, back facing the correct way. Hayley turned to Alex. HAYLEY: Don't you just love him!? ALEX: You have a crush on him? HAYLEY: Yeah! For like the last five years! ALEX: Aw! Did you two ever date? HAYLEY: (Glumly) No. (Normally) So have you seen any cute guys around? ALEX: No, not yet. I haven't much time for gu- Before Alex could finish her sentence the teacher stormed in. She stopped talking straight away as the stern-looking teacher took his things from his bag. MR. SAMPSON: Morning class, take out your books and open them up on page eighty nine. The class take out their books and Hayley shoves hers between she and Alex. MR. SAMPSON: (Peeved) Hayley Greene, where's your book? I've told you before you're not allowed to share. HAYLEY: Sorry sir, the new girl Alex doesn't have one yet. MR. SAMPSON: (Sighs) Right, Alex welcome to Rocas. Go down to the library now and get your books. ALEX: Yes sir. Alex stands up and begins to walk out. HAYLEY: Will I go out with her sir? She wouldn't know where the library is. MR. SAMPSON: No, you'll only be messing. Uh…Tina you're quiet, would you please show Alex to the library? TINA: Yes sir. Tina rolls her eyes as she gets up and walks out with Alex. CUT TO… INT. SCHOOL HALL. Alex walks just in front of Tina. Tina seems to glare at Alex and then when Alex looks at her she looks away again. This continues until they arrive in front of the library. TINA: This is the library, I need to go do something so I'll leave you here. See ya. Before Alex even gets a chance to reply Tina has walked off. Alex turns to look at her again but she has disappeared. She wears a confused expression on her face and then walks into the library. CUT TO… INT. LIBRARY. Alex walks into the library and looks around. She walks up to the main desk. ALEX: Hello? There's no response so Alex walks towards the back of the library. She takes a look around again and sees nobody around. ALEX: Hello!? Again, she sees nobody around. After a few seconds there is a loud bang. Alex's head snaps, looking in the direction of the back of the library. She walks down to the back, goes down a few steps and enters the old section of the library. The camera rotates slowly in a three hundred and sixty degree angle and we see no sign of a door. Alex sighs slightly. ALEX: Reveal. Alex opens out her hands and an orange mist leaves them, hitting all of the floor, bookcases and walls in that section of the library. When the mist disappears a trap door is revealed on the ground, and the lock is turned. LIBRARIAN: Someone there? ALEX: Conceal. Another mist leaves Alex's hands, this time only hitting the trap door. She runs forward to the new part of the library. ALEX: Yeah, I'm new here. I need books. LIBRARIAN: Ah, you must be Alex. Yes I've your books here. He runs up behind the counter and takes out a load of books. LIBRARIAN: Right, I think that's all of them. If you need anything else then don't hesitate in coming back. ALEX: Thanks, I need you to sign these too. Alex hands over a few forms to the librarian. LIBRARIAN: Ah, yes. No problem. The librarian pulls out a pen from the top pocket of his jacket. He fills out a few details regarding insurance stuff and serial numbers. When it comes to signing his name Alex notices that his writing seems really old-fashioned. He smiles as he hands her the books. LIBRARIAN: Right then, you're sorted. ALEX: Thanks. LIBRARIAN: (Smiles) Sure thing. Alex picks up her books and walks out of the library. We see as she walks out the librarian glares at her. Once Alex shuts the door after her the librarian hit's the main desk. LIBRARIAN: Damn it! He quickly walks towards the back of the library, where Alex found the trap door. FADE TO BLACK. END OF ACT I. Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
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Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:01 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	]ACT II: CUT TO… INT. CANTEEN. The scene opens with Alex walking around the canteen with a tray of lunch in her hand. She looks around and any table we see is filled with people. She's about to walk out of the canteen until she hears someone call her. HAYLEY: Alex! Alex turns and faces Hayley. She's walking alongside two guys; Mike and Doug. HAYLEY: Come sit with us. We eat outside. C'mon. Alex, Hayley, Mike and Doug walk outside. CUT TO… EXT. OUT IN A LAWN. SUNNY AFTERNOON. Alex, Hayley, Doug and Mike are sitting at a table and bench. The four of them are eating. DOUG: So Alex, how do you find Rocas? ALEX: Love it. It's so much better than New York. Gorgeous weather, I can finally go to the beach and there seems to be a small crime rate. Well, so I've seen. Hayley looks away and seems to look a little worried. HAYLEY: I need to go. I'll be back in a minute. ALEX: Is she okay? Anytime I mention crime rate she changes the subject and gets all jumpy. MIKE: Well, her Mom went missing a few years ago. She's never been found. So she's very touchy on the whole crime subject. ALEX: Oh God, I never knew. DOUG: But to answer your question the crime rate here sucks. It's probably nothing compared to New York but for a town this size it's big enough. ALEX: In what sense? DOUG: Lots of people disappear. Even more are found dead. And just a lot of strange stuff goes on. There are these troublemakers that go around town at night. We have a stupid curfew of 9:00p.m. ALEX: Oh. Hayley arrives back and sits at the table. Mike smiles at her. MIKE: (Nervously) So Hayley…uh…have you got a date to the uh…uh…Christmas Dance? HAYLEY: No. I've no idea who would like to take me. Hayley looks down but takes a quick look at Doug. Alex notices this and smirks a little. ALEX: I need to go. I think I dropped my necklace in the library, I'll just go check if it's there. HAYLEY: Want someone to go with you? ALEX: No, I'm good. Thanks. I'll be back soon. Alex smiles and waves as she walks away from the desk, quickening her pace as she walks on. CUT TO… INT. SCHOOL HALL. Alex slowly walks through the abandoned school hall. She walks slowly and looks carefully at each door, making sure not to get lost. Though there's a sudden sound of a struggle and Alex stops walking. Then there's a sudden thud. Alex runs to the end of the hall and turns left, going into a dressing room. She looks around and can't find anything or anyone. She continues into the swimming pool. She sees footsteps leading out the door and she carefully jogs over to those. When she looks in the swimming pool she sees blood and when she looks to the side she sees the body of a male lying by the pool, face-down. She runs over and puts her hands on his neck, and shakes her head as she takes it off. She carefully turns over the body and examines it for marks, but only finds that one of his wrists (which was dangling over the pool) was cut at the artery. She lays the body back, as she found it and stands up, then the camera focuses on a necklace on the ground. She bends down and picks it up. It's circular with a thirteen point star in the middle of the circle, each point hitting the circle. ALEX: (To self) The Wicca. Alex sighs as she looks around, the camera stops on a window. Alex screams as if horrified a few times. She stands silently until the sounds of running footsteps approach the pool. When they are near the door Alex runs over to the window and climbs out. The camera goes back to the body, which now is surrounded by three men, asking each other what the hell could've happened. CUT TO… INT. THE LIBRARY. Alex runs into the library once again. ALEX: Hello? She stands in the middle of the library for a few moments before walking on. She goes to the back of the library where she found the secret door before. ALEX: Reveal. An orange mist leaves Alex's hand and hit's the floor, once again revealing the trap door. Alex bends down to it and tries opening it. She fails and stands back. ALEX: Open. An orange mist leaves her hands, hitting the trap door, but fails to affect the lock. Alex sighs as she gets on her knees and takes a closer look at the lock. It seems very long and very thing, very much so for a key. Then she takes the necklace that she found by the swimming pool out of her pocket and slips it into the lock. Once it's placed halfway in the lock seems to almost swallow it up. The lock turns with a yellow glow and the necklace comes back out. Alex grabs it and opens up the trap door. She jumps down and locks the door after her. CUT TO… INT. A LONG TUNNEL. Alex looks around her. She's in a long tunnel with the walls coloured a warm orange. There are torches on the wall, the only source of light being the flames. There are portraits on the wall of many women, of a variety of ages, though mostly old. There are cobwebs covering the top corners of the walls where they meet the ceiling and more cobwebs on the picture. Alex looks down the tunnel and we see a door, with a small light around the edges of the door. She slowly walks down and when she arrives at the door she puts her ear up to it, to hear if there's anybody in there, and if so who…or what. The camera goes into the room. CUT TO. INT. SECRET UNDERGROUND LIBRARY. We are in a large room, with many, many bookcases filled to capacity with books. The walls are the same colour as the tunnel walls and there are lots of cobwebs on the walls and ceiling and much dust on the books. There is a set of stairs going up to where there is another section of books. Going back downstairs there is a round table in the middle of the room. There are about seven cloaked Witches looking up at another cloaked figure who appears to be their leader. There is a massive tablecloth on the table with the Wicca symbol on it. There are many candles lighting around this secret library and there are torches like in the tunnel on the wall also. TINA: Right, seems we have trouble. I thought the new girl was a Witican and Nick just told me so earlier. She's got to be watched. CALLIE: Why not just kill her? TINA: You've never met a Witican Callie. You underestimate how strong and clever they are. She'll know who you all are by your lack of aura straight away. WITCH 1: What if she spies on us? If we set it up so she'll find us and look for our auras? Then you with your superior powers can sense her doing so. TINA: Yeah, don't you think she'll know that herself? I know her type, she's suspicious. It's best leave her alone, just let her come to us. But keep an eye on her tonight. I do not want her ruining this ritual. She doesn't know where the caves are, being new here so that's our advantage. And don't attack her alone, make sure there are at least four of you. CALLIE: What do we do now? TINA: We wait. She's already halfway free, the volcano proved that. The ritual tonight will complete things, and she'll be freed in that pit at the cave. Just one sacrifice now to get the ball rolling. Tina takes out a test tube from her pocket which is filled with blood. CALLIE: (Impressed) Where did you get that? TINA: Killed one of the guys from the swimming team about twenty minutes ago. Lovely fresh blood. Tina pours the test tube into a cauldron which has flames coming from it. When the blood is poured in it begins steaming at an awful rate. Tina picks up the cauldron and moves it aside, onto one of the side tables. TINA: Once that stops we begin tonight. Get out before curfew and bring a sacrifice. Someone around my age, the younger the blood the better. But not too young. Maybe get a seventeen year old, that usually works the fastest. WITCH 3: Why not just try and free the whole Coven tonight? TINA: With us it'll take more than one ritual and a lot of power. After tonight, by freeing one, let's just hope she'll help us and we could free them tomorrow. CALLIE: What do we do if the Witican gets involved? TINA: Hmmmmm…that shouldn't happen. But if it does…capture her alive. Bring her to the cave- WITCH 3: (Excitedly) And kill her for the ritual!? Free the Coven with a Witican! Now that would be cool! TINA: No you idiot. The blood of a Witican would seal the gate freeing her and trap her for longer. Hence why I want her alive. Surely one of you klutz's will spill her blood in. CALLIE: If that happens, the Witican coming I mean, what do we do to punish her? Tina grins. The camera then goes back out the tunnel where Alex continues to eavesdrop. TINA: I love your style Callie. If the Witican so much as looks at you sideways, capture her and bring her to me. Then find her home and bring me her family. Mother, father, siblings, whoever is there, bring them. Then I can kill them in front of her. Tina laughs but at the same time Alex gasps. Tina stops laughing instantly and the camera goes back into the secret library. TINA: Sounds and…smells like we have a guest. (Smirks) Don't worry Witican, you don't smell. I can just smell your fear, please, do come in. The door opens slowly and Alex walks in, instantly throwing an orange ball of energy at Tina, who she couldn't see due to the cloak. Tina catches the ball of energy with ease and turns it indigo, throwing it back at Alex. Alex somersaults to avoid being hit by it, it's rapid speed making it difficult to catch. A few moments later Tina speaks. TINA: What did you hear? ALEX: Everything. I know where you are going to be, when and why you will be there. TINA: Why isn't she a brainy box? (Smirks) Won't matter for long now. ALEX: I will not let you harm my family! TINA: Don't worry. I won't be touching your family. Well, I'm going to get the rest of the Wicca that are present here to kill you. So I'll have more important things to do than kill your family. ALEX: Good luck with that. Tina laughs. TINA: Full of confidence this one, eh!? Well, I would stay around and chat but I've got a schedule to stick to and, gotta go. Tina walks over to Callie and puts her and on her shoulder. TINA: Adios! She opens out her hand and an indigo mist surrounds them. They disappear behind it and when it disappears they are gone. ALEX: (To self) Holy crap. Alex takes small steps backwards as the six remaining Witches close in around Alex. WITCH 1: So what do we do with this one? Torture her and feed on her fear before the ritual? I hear the fear of a Witican is ten times more nutritious than the average human. WITCH 2: I think let's have some fun. WITCH 3: But if we mess this up then Tina will kill us. "Rollin' "by "Limp Bizkit" begins to play quietly in the background. WITCH 2: Stop wasting time and let's get her! The Witches close in around Alex as she backs quickly but hits into the wall. When this happens the guitar intro for "Rollin'" comes in more loudly and prominently. ALEX: Mist! Alex opens out her hand and an orange mist leaves her hand, surrounding the Witches. When they are caught by the mist and are struggling to find their way out Alex runs back into the tunnel and back up to the trap door from where she came in. She struggles to get the Wiccan necklace from her pocket as the Witches are getting out of the mist and are beginning to make their way down the tunnel. Alex sticks the necklace into the hole but just as she's doing so it dissolves in her hand. WITCH 3: Idiot! We never go out that way! Just in case anybody ever got in. The other Witches glare at her. WITCH 1: You just told her…oh never mind! The Witches begin to close in on Alex again. Alex sighs as she jump kicks on of them in the face. She falls back onto another Witch and they both fall to the ground. Alex throws an orange ball of energy, hitting the other three Witches and knocking them to the ground also. Alex jumps over them and runs back into the library. She looks around for another exit, which she knows exists. She looks around frantically and doesn't even know where to begin looking. At this point the Witches are chasing her again. Alex looks to where Tina was standing before. She notices that there's one particular shelf of books that are perfectly straight, tidy and there's no dust on them. She runs straight up to them and finds one small gap in the books. At this point five of the six Witches have entered the library again. Alex puts her hands between two books and pulls. The books are stiff and the bookcase pulls out from the wall, revealing a doorway. Alex squeezes through the tiny gap but falls instantly as she runs through. She crashes down concrete stairs and lands with a thud on the ground. Song ends. CUT TO… INT. UNDERGROUND SEWERS. Alex quickly gets up and staggers to the left of the main path, she hides in a smaller tunnel. She holds her arm close to her and puts her other arm around it. She winces in pain as she hides as best as she can. She watches as the five conscious Witches run straight past her hiding place. Alex waits a minute or so before limping out again. She looks around and sees a bar ladder going up a wall. She staggers over and struggles up the ladder. When she gets to the top there is a circular piece of metal on the roof. ALEX: Incinerate. An orange mist leaves her hand and incinerates the metal on the roof as the mist hits it. Alex puts her arms over the hole and grips it. Then she pulls herself above ground. When she stands up she gets many funny looks from everybody who is passing. She runs as fast as her injured-self will take her back to school. CUT TO… EXT. OUTSIDE THE SCHOOL. SUNNY AFTERNOON. Alex limps inside the school gates where she sees the whole school standing around looking horror-stricken. Alex limps in past the ambulance crew and finds Hayley, Doug and Mike looking horrified. ALEX: What's going on? DOUG: Johnny from the swim team was found dead. They think it was…it was…suicide. ALEX: Oh gosh. HAYLEY: Where were you and…what the hell happened you!? ALEX: I fell down the stairs in the library and got cut pretty bad so I went to the hospital to get looked at. HAYLEY: Jeez, are you alright? Looks like they didn't do too much for you. Alex looks down at her wounds which are still unattended to. ALEX: When I was two blocks away I realised I was late so I turned back. HAYLEY: You should tell a teacher. ALEX: Leave it. Honestly, I'm a quick healer. And they do have enough on their plate at the moment. HAYLEY: Only if you're sure. ALEX: Yeah, I am, promise. Alex pats the almost-crying Hayley on the back to comfort her as they take the dead body on a stretcher into the ambulance. CUT TO… INT. CLASSROOM. ALEX: Alright Hayley? HAYLEY: I guess. Just this kinda stuff makes me sad. Poor guy. Just hope it wasn't slow for him. ALEX: It was very quick. Believe me, I should know by now. HAYLEY: What? ALEX: Oh, that sounds bad. When I was young I cut my wrist in an accident once and I've seen it happen a few times since then. We were all lucky to be taken to the hospital straight away. I passed out after only a few minutes. He didn't suffer. HAYLEY: Jeez, you're really clumsy. Well, it's good to know though. Thanks. ALEX: Alright. HAYLEY: I'm not being insensitive when I say this but, do you want me to show you around town later? I know it seems bad with what just happened but I just don't see the point in wallowing all evening and doing nothing. Besides, he wouldn't want that. So…wanna come? ALEX: Yeah, that would be great, thanks. HAYLEY: Sure, no problem. Besides, it'll be good for you to see the good points of Rocas and not the bad points. Eh? ALEX: Yeah, actually, now that you mention it. I was wondering if you could show me the caves? I hear there are some caves here… HAYLEY: Oh yeah, the caves here are spectacular. Rocas is renowned for it. ALEX: Cool. Uh…I was wondering actually could we go to the beach later. I'd really like to go for a swim. HAYLEY: Wow, they are actually on the opposite sides of town. We'd never make both before curfew. Well, I mean the beach is massive and would nearly take you there from one side but that side is never really used, you could find anyone down there. ALEX: Oh, alright. Well, if you could give me directions to the caves then I could maybe head down in my own time. I'd really like to see the beach. HAYLEY: Sure. The bell to signal the end of the end of the school day rings and everybody gets up and walks out. ALEX: There's no chance you could give me directions to the caves now is there? HAYLEY: Yeah ok. Basically you just go right when you leave school and carry on straight up that road. Though it's quite a long way, you would want a car if you want to go to the beach too. ALEX: Yeah, thanks. So what time will I meet you later? HAYLEY: Outside the beach at six o' clock? ALEX: Yeah sure! That would be great. See you then. Alex and Hayley smile and wave at each other as they walk off. END OF ACT II. Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
Anarchy Angel		#3	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:01 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	ACT III: CUT TO… INT. ALEX'S BEDROOM. The scene opens on Alex's door. After a few seconds pass the door opens and Alex walks through. She throws her schoolbag on the floor beside her table and walks over to her wardrobe. She opens it and she roots through her stuff until the middle of the wardrobe floor is clear. She then pulls out a panel at the back and we see a secret section in the wardrobe. It's filled with bottles of salt water, crosses and weapons such as knives made of bone and small shotguns with silver bullets lying beside them. Alex pulls out some crosses and salt water and puts them into a shoulder bag. When she's in the middle of packing there's a knock on her door. She urgently throws the bag into her wardrobe and shuts it, she stands with her back to it. ALEX: Come in. The door opens and Angela walks through. ALEX: Hey Mom. ANGELA: Hi Alex. How was your first day? ALEX: Was going great, met a nice girl But a guy was found dead by the swimming pool. They think it was suicide so…in that aspect not great. ANGELA: Jeez that's awful. I'm glad you have a friend. You seem to have brightened up since New York, though you still seem a bit preoccupied. Something up? ALEX: No, everything's fine. Just a bit freaked about that guy y'know. Is it okay if I go out with Hayley tonight? She's gonna show me around town a little, just help me get to know the place. ANGELA: Yep, that's fine. Just make sure you're back before curfew. ALEX: Sure, don't worry. Alex smiles reassuringly as she takes a look at her watch which reads 17.15. ANGELA: Are you going to be around for dinner? ALEX: Doubt it, I've to be outside the school for six and I really need to go now. Talk to you later. ANGELA: Sure, have a nice time. Angela smiles as she gets up and walks out of the bedroom. Alex grabs her bag and walks out the door a few minutes after Angela. Alex runs out the front door and out of sight from any of the houses. ALEX: (To self) Right. Take me right from the school, straight up that road and to the entrance of the caves. Alex opens out her hand and an orange mist leaves her hand, covering her. She disappears and reappears in front of a rocky hole on the ground. CUT TO… EXT. CAVE ENTRANCE. EVENING. Alex takes a look around and then opens her bag which she then puts on the ground. She takes out three bottles of salt water and puts them under a few plants around the rocks. After she does that she closes the bag and hops into the hole. CUT TO… INT. CAVE. Alex walks into a large cave. There's a very large hole in the middle, where there is a small fire burning. After a moment we see a cloaked figure (Tina) walking towards the pit. Alex quickly and quietly runs back and hides behind a mound of rocks. She crawls to the edge and peeks out to see what this cloaked figure is doing. She's carrying a lot of wood in her arms, when she gets to the pit she throws it in and there's a sudden roar from the fire as the flames get very high. They die down after a moment to a slightly bigger fire than before. Then after a few seconds the cloaked figure pulls a glass vial from her pocket which is filled with a blue liquid. She opens it and pours it in, making the flames roar even more loudly and they shoot up to hit the ceiling of the cave, which on that part of the ceiling there is a large stone engraving of the Wicca symbol. Once the flames burn half-way up to the ceiling the cloaked figure gracefully walks up to the entrance where Alex walked in. she hops up and climbs out. Alex waits a few minutes before walking out of her hiding place. She walks to where the pit is and is careful around the fire. She hides some more bottles of salt water under some rocks. She runs to another few parts of the cave and does the same. Once she's finished with that she walks around and looks at the scene. She finds a mound of rocks. She pulls on one and sees that the mound is ready to collapse. She also finds a set of chains connected to a wheel-like thing and the chains stretch up to where the Wicca symbol is. She grins as she takes a look at her watch which reads 18.05. ALEX: Shoot. Take me to the beach. Alex opens out her hands and an orange mist leaves them, covering her whole body. She disappears beneath it. CUT TO… EXT. THE BEACH. EVENING. Hayley is standing on the sidewalk outside the beach. We see many people swimming and having fun in the beach in the background. Hayley looks at her watch and then looks around for Alex. Alex walks up behind her. ALEX: So sorry I'm late. Hayley gets a shock so she jumps and shrieks a little. HAYLEY: (Smirks) Jeez Alex, you nearly frightened me to death! ALEX: Sorry. I got delayed. You're not waiting long are you? HAYLEY: No! C'mon! Doug and Mike are there! Alex walks with Hayley into the beach and are greeted by Doug and Mike almost straight away. DOUG: Hey girls! Doug runs up to them before Mike arrives. HAYLEY: Hey Doug! How are you!? DOUG: Good! C'mon Mike! Hurry up! Mike runs up to them. MIKE: Hey guys. Mike smiles as he looks at Hayley. Alex and Doug chuckle quietly to themselves as Mike makes it obvious he likes Hayley. HAYLEY: Right, I'm going to show Alex around town now. I'll talk to you guys later? DOUG: Sure, see ya. MIKE: (Dreamily) Bye Hayley. (Normally) Bye Alex. Both Alex and Doug smirk once again. Alex and Hayley both smile, wave and walk away. CUT TO… EXT. STREET IN COSTAS DE LAS ROCAS. EVENING. HAYLEY: Well I think that, that's everything there is to see. So what do you think of Rocas? ALEX: Love it. It's amazing. So much better than New York. HAYLEY: You really didn't like it there did you? ALEX: No. the crime there was sky high, the air was dirty, it was always so, so busy and there was nothing there. Also, we did live on the road where my Dad got killed, so it was tough. HAYLEY: Jeez, I'm so sorry. Hope you don't mind me asking but when did it happen? ALEX: When I was five. HAYLEY: Oh God, that's so young. I'm sorry. (Pause) My Mom went missing when I was twelve. We never found out what happened. So I can kinda understand what you're going through. ALEX: Sorry about your Mom, must be worse for you though. HAYLEY: Anyway, let's not talk about that! So uh…wanna head back to the beach? ALEX: Yeah, sure let's go. Alex and Hayley both begin walking silently walking towards the beach. CUT TO… EXT. BEACH. NIGHT. Alex and Hayley arrive back at the beach. They walk in and back over to Doug. DOUG: Hey girlies! Mike had to go home. So, you like Rocas, Alex? ALEX: Yeah, I love it. DOUG: Great, so you wanna go for a swim? ALEX: Well, I'm not really dressed for it. DOUG: Aw, you don't have to be! ALEX: I'd rather not. Next time definitely! DOUG: Alright then. You coming Hayles? HAYLEY: Yes, definitely! DOUG: Great! HAYLEY: You don't mind being on your own for a few minutes do you? I promise I won't be long. ALEX: It's cool. Honestly. I'll just walk around the beach, or watch. It's good. HAYLEY: Alright. Thanks. See you soon! Hayley runs off with Doug. Alex sighs as she looks around. ALEX: (To self) Please let there be no Witches. Alex walks around the beach a little, she looks at many people, presumably checking for an aura with each of them. After a while she walks back over to where she was last talking to Hayley and Doug. She walks slightly further back and sits on a few rocks and looks out at the sea. She smirks as she watches Hayley with Doug, flirting. Alex grabs a stick and begins to draw in the sand, still taking a look around for Witches. When she looks back out at the sea we see Tina seemingly "flirting" with Doug. Of course, her being really pretty, he falls for it. Alex looks on suspiciously, from what she's seen and heard of Tina she wouldn't be the type to be nice to Doug, we can see it by the way Alex stands up and frowns as she looks down. She looks away, picking up her bag of weapons and when she looks back Tina is gone and Doug seems to be looking around for something. When Alex runs down and takes a closer look in the water Hayley is missing. Alex takes a quick look around the beach. There's no sign of Hayley. She takes a look at her watch which reads: 20:45. Then a flashback comes into Alex's mind. CLOAKED FIGURE: Once that stops we begin tonight. Get out before curfew and bring a sacrifice. Someone around my age, the younger the blood the better. But not too young. Maybe get a seventeen year old, that usually works the fastest. ALEX: Holy crap! Alex runs straight out of beach and onto the road. She runs until she's out of sight by everyone. ALEX: Take me near the caves. She opens out her hands and an orange mist surrounds her and she disappears. CUT TO… EXT. ENTERANCE OF CAVE. NIGHT. Alex is hiding behind a few mounds of rocks that are near the cave. There are two Witches standing at each side of the entrance. Alex prepares to orange balls of energy in each hand. She jumps out from her hiding place and before either of the Witches can react she throws the energy balls at them, knocking each one unconscious. She runs forward and jumps down the hole, into the cave. END OF ACT III Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
Anarchy Angel		#4	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:01 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	ACT IV: CUT TO… INT. THE CAVE. Alex walks slowly and quietly through the cave, making her way through to the main cavern. When she arrives she hides just outside the main cavern. She takes two bottles of salt water from her bag. She loosens the caps on each bottle. She watches the ritual, looking around to try and get her bearings. ALEX: (To self) Hayley, where are you? The fire crackling fiercely. As we watch it changes colour. We hear someone from off-screen speaking in a strange language, presumably Latin. This continues for a moment. The camera pans out slowly. We see a group of cloaked people gathered around the fire. Two similarly cloaked people hold a tightly bound girl up. A close up on her face reveals that she is terrified. The two holding her up step forward, dragging the reluctant girl between them. This obviously seems to be some kind of ritual and we seem to be nearing it's climax. As they approach the fire, it seems to grow, to burn more fiercely. There seems to be no hope for the girl. A light breeze blows, playing around the edges of the cloaks. This seems to have put out the fire easily. Everyone whips around . We don't see the source of the disturbance, but it seems to agitate the figures, as they pull out knives that seem to be made of bone and rush off-screen. The camera spins around and we see Alex fighting the cloaked figures. Alex knocks the loose caps off the bottles of salt water and she pours them all over the approaching Witches. The Witches scream as steam begins to come from the Witches skin. Some of the Witches' skin shrivels and they shrivel down into nothing. Alex makes an energy ball in each hand and throws it at some of the on-coming Witches. Once it hits them they fall unconscious. Alex does this twice more, knocking out the other four Witches who were approaching her. TINA: Don't just stand there! Get her! As Tina's head snaps around her hood falls, revealing her identity. More cloaked figures run at Alex but she beats them with more energy balls. Alex runs up closer to where the ritual is taking place. ALEX: I should've guessed it was you Tina. I can't believe I didn't recognise your British accent in the library. TINA: Well, I was clever then. Once I knew there was a Witican I changed my accent in every meeting, just in case you decided to come along. Bad memory. Tina smirks as she glares at Alex. ALEX: What did you do with Hayley!? TINA: Why, she has the honour of being our main sacrifice. Tina smirks as she looks up at the ceiling, above the flames. Alex's eyes widen. The chains keep Hayley pinned to the ceiling. Each arm and leg touching a point of the thirteen-point star. She's unconscious. ALEX: I thought this happened already. The girl, I saw her in my dream…but the volcano happened… TINA: Yeah, I guess you have the gift of prediction. The volcano probably happened shortly after the dream. (Smirks) Now I'd love to chat but…kinda limited with time here! The rest of you get her! More cloaked figures run at Alex as Tina, once again, begins the ritual again. Callie is standing beside her at this stage. Callie begins speaking, with identical lip movements to Tina. The flames seems to resurrect and even more powerful than they were before. Alex continues to fight the Witches and soon they are all knocked out. Very soon there are very few Witches. Tina snaps her head around once again. TINA: Get her! The rest of the Witches seems to take a few steps backwards. Tina sighs. TINA: Callie, distract her. Callie runs straight at Alex and draws a sword made of bone. ALEX: You really should just run back to Tina. Might do you the world of good. CALLIE: (Smirks) You wish. Callie runs at Alex. Alex jump kicks and manages to knock the sword from her hand. Alex grabs a cross from her bag and throws it at Callie. Instincts make Callie catch it and it sizzles in her hand, causing steam to rise. Callie screams in agony as she drops it. Tina seems distracted but still concentrates on the ritual. Alex continues to fight Callie, but Callie is stronger than any of the other Witches. Alex throws an energy ball at Callie who easily knocks it away. The flames in the pit seem to roar and change colour once again. TINA: (To self) It's time. Tina runs over to where the chains are at the wheel. She easily climbs up the chains to where Hayley is tied to the ceiling. At this stage, Hayley has just regained consciousness and is looking in horror down at the fight. She only notices Tina beside her when she arrives. HAYLEY: (Terrified screams) Alex! Alex! Alex's head snaps up when she hears Hayley and her eyes widen as she sees Tina about to slit her wrists above the pit. Callie takes advantage of the distracted Alex and kicks her into the stomach, sending her ten feet back. Alex crashes to the ground and moans as she sits up. Callie is standing above her with a green energy ball in her hand. CALLIE: Any last words, Witican? Alex grins up at her as she discretely grabs two bottles of salt water she hid there when she came earlier. ALEX: Yes, adios! Alex pours both bottles on Callie as she screams in agony and quickly shrivels to nothing. Tina screams in anger as she sees her right-hand shrivel to nothing at the hands of her enemy. Alex doesn't waste any time in running over to the chains to stop Tina from killing Hayley. When she arrives at the chains Tina slits each of Hayley's wrists and she bleeds into the pit of fire which begins raging out of control once the blood hits it. Tina jumps down from the chains and lands in front of a mound of rocks. At this stage Alex is climbing up the chains to save Hayley and try to prevent the ritual. Once Alex reaches Hayley she grabs her to make sure she's stable and won't fall into the fire. TINA: (Teasingly) Oh Reddick!? Alex looks down as Tina is about to cut the chains, which would result in them both falling to their certain death. Alex throws an energy ball at the mound of rocks which is in front of Tina. When the energy ball hits them they all begin falling. Tina dives out of the way, though still getting lightly injured by them. The flames are almost hitting Alex and Hayley as Alex tries to free Hayley from the chains. Alex cuts the chains with a bone knife she picked up from the ground. It cuts through them easily and Alex has to hold onto one side of Hayley to stop her being burned to death. Alex cuts the other set of chains, causing her to be the only source of support Hayley has. The flames are almost hitting them. Alex swings the chains that she's holding onto and swings the chains, with she and Hayley going with it. The fire skins Alex's left leg as she swings past with Hayley. Once the chain takes them away from the flames Alex slides down, landing with a thump to the rocky ground, breaking the fall for Hayley. The chains swings back and meet the flames which then hit the ceiling. The chain incinerates when in contact with the flames. Just as the flames cover the full Wicca symbol on the ceiling the flames turn pure black. Tina grins as she gets up off the ground. She runs towards the pit. TINA: (Ecstatically) It worked! I've freed her! Alex and Hayley both gasp in horror as the black flames rage all out of control. Alex grabs Hayley's right arm and turns it so the slit is facing upwards. ALEX: Heal. The orange mist hits Hayley's arm and heals the slit and stops the bleeding. Alex does the same with the other arm. ALEX: There'll be light scars for a while but you'll be fine. I'm sorry about all this. HAYLEY: Who or what are you? ALEX: I'm a Witican, the good guy. I slay Witches. HAYLEY: So Witches live among us and try to kill us all but you stop them? ALEX: …yes… HAYLEY: Cool! Uh…what's going on here? ALEX: We're about to find out. Alex stands up and helps Hayley off the ground. They both watch in apprehension as the flames rage out of control. Tina walks closer to the flames, with the black flames reflecting in her emerald-green eyes. She stares intently into the flames as she seems to be drawn towards them. After a few seconds we see a silhouette of some shape begin to rise in the flames. As it slowly rises we see the shape of a woman. After a minute or two the woman has fully risen and steps out of the flames. Tina runs over to the woman who is at the opposite side of the flames to Alex and Hayley, so that can't see what this woman looks like. TINA: Welcome back, Darla. Tina grins. DARLA: Get me out of here. TINA: Sure thing. Tina grins as she puts her hand on Darla's shoulder and they are both surrounded by a blue/indigo mist and disappear. After a few seconds the flames completely disappear into tiny embers. Alex and Hayley both look at each other. HAYLEY: What was that? ALEX: The death of the world from what I heard. C'mon, I have time to stop her. Alex helps the weak Hayley in walking out of the cave. CUT TO… EXT. COUNTRY ROAD. NIGHT. HAYLEY: Am I dreaming? ALEX: No. Witches do exist, and I have similar powers to them. Except I use mine for good and there are less of us Witicans. There are five of us currently in existence and…well…millions of Witches. HAYLEY: Bad? ALEX: We manage. Look Hayley, you can't tell anybody about what you saw tonight. HAYLEY: Do you think I'm crazy! I'd never tell! ALEX: Thanks. HAYLEY: They'd never believe me. ALEX: Oh, great. (Smirks) Alex looks at her watch which reads 23:59. ALEX: Fantastic, late for curfew…very late for curfew. My Mom's gonna kill me. And some severe mistrust for a very long time. HAYLEY: Don't worry. On the bright side you have super powers! It's not like your Mom can stop you going out! Alex smirks a little as they both walk on. The camera pans out and shows us a view of the night sky, litten by the bright moonlight. FADE TO BLACK. END OF EPISODE Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
xenares		#5	[-]
Olympian Posts: 11550 12/13/09 5:10 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Whooho!! It's late here, now, so I'll read it tomorrow hopefully =) Cool, glad you posted it!!
Anarchy Angel		#6	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:16 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Thanks a mill! Can't wait to see what you think!! ((And if you don't like it, just say. But if you love it deffo say! :P)) Also, for anybody who finds English a hard language (I'm aware that English isn't many people's first language here) just say in a reply if you don't understand something and I'll simplify it for you. Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
mickey		#7	[-]
One Star General Posts: 1780 12/13/09 5:47 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Ok so far I've only read the first part but it was AMAZING. You seriously wrote this? I want to watch it now. You should be really pleased
Anarchy Angel		#8	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 5:51 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	OMG thank you so much! And yes I wrote it! Thank you so, so much!!! Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
xxdecrepitxx		#9	[-]
One Star General Posts: 1818 12/13/09 8:14 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Anarchy Angel wrote: Witches- The bad guys. They have no ability to love and they have a lack of conscience. What would Willow and Tara say about this? Just kidding. Very impressive project! Naughty avatar(s) courtesy of radon_@lj
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Four Star General Posts: 4705 12/13/09 8:29 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Or the charmed ones On topic though i rather enjoyed this! Dude you have me religiously reading so much now xD Its rather awesome! Who votes to take the vehicle into the creepy underground tunnel?
Anarchy Angel		#11	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/13/09 8:37 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Thanks so much guys! Love both your sigs!!! i love Willow and Tara! Awesome couple!!!! Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
xena321		#12	[-]
Royal Posts: 9526 12/13/09 10:21 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Wow amazing, I love it so far. Awesome selection of cast. I like how you set things out, its quite original and interesting. Maybe you can cast Alyson Hannigan, Amber Bensen and the Charmed cast in roles. lol hehe thanks Bitter Suite for the banner for the avis
xenares		#13	[-]
Olympian Posts: 11550 12/16/09 4:23 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Wow! I've only read the first act yet, but it's awesome! I'm gonna agree with mickey... Did you actually write that?! It's great, it's so vivid that I could imagine the whole scene and even their facial expressions while reading it =D
Anarchy Angel		#14	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/17/09 5:44 PM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Whoa! Thanks for the amazing reviews! I actually cried they were so sweet! Please let me know what y'all think of the bits after act I! I'm so, so happy! Have episode 2 finished. Just editing it to make sure there are no typos or stupid things in it. should be able to post it....tomorrow or the day after! Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
xenares		#15	[-]
Olympian Posts: 11550 12/20/09 10:30 AM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Hi! I've just read the other 3 acts and I liked them a lot too, of course. I love the action, the descriptions and the original story you've chosen! Can I ask you a question? Does Tina belong to Wicca? And then, why does she want to free Darla, who fights for the greater good? Thanks
Anarchy Angel		#16	[-]
Two Star General Posts: 2395 12/20/09 11:46 AM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	Thanks! You actually find out in episode 2 but I'll explain now. Tina is the "leader" of the Wicca as her mother is the leader/strongest/eldest member of the Coven. She used to be really mean to Tina before being captured so Darla was like a Mother to Tina. So Tina hopes Darla will help free them for her and not think about the greater good. I'm posting episode 2 later. =) Need me to explain anything else? Thanks to xenarocksmysocks for making me the sig! Misfit of Immortality \| Xena Warrior Princess: Travels with Callisto \| Reddick \| Loan Warrior (Archer) "Follow your heart; it's the only way you'll make your dreams come true." - Darla, Reddick.
xenares		#17	[-]
Olympian Posts: 11550 12/20/09 11:54 AM Reply Quote More My Recent Posts	No,no ,thans A LOT! You've been very helpful
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